Comments:Virgin Atlantic jet fire investigation finds faulty wiring in A340 fleet

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Interesting, but too much paragraphs. This 'accident' is, in my opinion, too old. As it happened, i'd read this with surprise and today create a 2nd article to this topic. The language is clearly and perspicuous, so it's easy to read. The heading is maybe too long, but with my English skill, I haven't got something shorter.

--Kai Burghardt (talk) 22:43, 14 February 2009 (UTC)


 * The article is not about the accident itself, but rather what the investigation has revealed. Almost everything there is new information from the report on Friday. In particular, there is the issues with wiring accross the fleet. I'm glad you found the article interesting and easily readable, though. Blood Red Sandman  (Talk)   (Contribs) 22:52, 14 February 2009 (UTC)

I think that this article should have more into it. it doesn't have enough detail--122.163.85.173 (talk) 02:51, 4 March 2011 (UTC)