Talk:"Fraudulent" U.S. military recruitment confirmed by audio/video tapes

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 * Title
 * Appears to say the US Military has been found guilty of fraud. Find a way to show it is reported or alleged, until guilt is determined by authorities.


 * The above comment is not accurate now Paulrevere2005 23:28, 13 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Image
 * I find no basis in the article as written to have the Marine logo. All or none, and might be better to have a "USA" logo instead of any one of the branches of military service.


 * Please read the article.Its not very long."Jim Massey, a former Marine recruiter.."This isn't just an isolated incident. This is a widespread epidemic! I would say 98 percent [of the recruits Massey enlisted] were fradulent."


 * But if you don't want the image,for whatever reason, can't you edit it out? Paulrevere2005 23:38, 13 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Content
 * Appears primarily to report how others are covering the story, and not the story itself. Who is accused of fraud, when did it happen, where did it happen, why did it happen, and if possible how did it happen?
 * The above comment is not accurate now,please read the article.Paulrevere2005 23:28, 13 May 2005 (UTC)

Answer these questions, please. - Amgine/talk 21:59, 13 May 2005 (UTC)