Talk:16-year-old girl charged with attempted murder in Melbourne, Australia

Review of revision 3578571 [Not ready]
Hi Pizero,

Thank you for reviewing the article.

I have fixed everything that you suggested but I am struggling with the length of the article. As it was only a short story and there isn't a lot of information I could only make it 2-3 sentences longer.

Kind regards, Michelle

̜ Uowmlb (talk) 22:58, 10 June 2015 (UTC)


 * The length looks much better now. --Pi zero (talk) 23:14, 10 June 2015 (UTC)