Talk:2008 Taipei Game Show review: Variations differ from past years

OR info
It's a damn difficult task to write this 4-in-1 mix article. It's a final and general review of Taipei Game Show 2008 as what I most gained from it. Whether this show is success or failure, I have learned some experiences from this mixed and multiple "Game Show". Brock contact... 17:45, 31 January 2008 (UTC)

Some Suggestions
I've found a few gramatical problems in the article that need to be taken care of. Also, the title doesnt quite sound right. I would change it to "2008 Taipei Game Show review: Ideas differ from past years" If its ok I'll try to take care of a few of the style errors. Also I think it would be better if the sources were in the standard format (check out the style guide on the left bar). Otherwise a very good article. TheVault 19:20, 31 January 2008 (UTC)


 * I made some style changes. Please consider my other suggestions. Also the third paragraph of the article, second under the first heading, makes no sense and needs to be revised. TheVault 19:42, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Even though it's an "Original Report"? Citing sources from an OR is "Optional", only required if it's "NOT" an original report. But it's still a great problem b/c of the existence of the translation information tag in the sources chapter. Brock contact... 05:38, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok cool. That makes sense. Also I don't know if you are ready to publish, but it seems like a good idea to get this out there before it's out of date. I think the article looks good. TheVault 23:57, 1 February 2008 (UTC)