Talk:21 people killed and 113 reported injured in three blasts in Mumbai

Some Mistakes might have occurred
Sirs, I am writing an article for Wikinews after a gap of 11 months. I do not know what systems you follow now. Also, some mistakes might have occurred in the writing. Please rectify them. I will go through all the guidelines pages once again during my leisure so that I may commit less mistakes from next time onwards. Thank you Srin  ivas  15:16, 13 July 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1258645 [Passed]
Strange really, refer my collaberation talk to the rejected other article same subject. In any case though that one was said to be encyclopedic, this one could at least link the Wikipedia site as so much more informative. If Wikinews seek to be uptodate, complete and informative to readers why not quote the sister ship link at lest? Try iit as below.

Cheers reviewer, I am sure you appreciate my words are well intended, to reduce the subjective reviews I have seen lately.--Robbygay (talk) 01:48, 17 July 2011 (UTC)http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/13_July_2011_Mumbai_bombings