Talk:Anonymous people reveal animal cruelty at Australian Inghams poultry producer factory using CCTV footage

Review of revision 1850112 [Not ready]
--Gryllida 05:16, 21 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Adding Wikinews links and Wikipedia links to aid in article clarity would be nice.
 * Done.
 * An information box would also be nice.
 * Not sure?
 * External links need to be removed from the article.
 * Done.
 * SMH should be spelled out for an international audience and then put into italics.
 * Done (not in italics, but still).
 * The lead should identify which abattoir in Sydney's south-west is involved.
 * ❌ (I didn't find out...).
 * There should be greater use of active voice.
 * Done.
 * Beyond non-neutral words like shocking and distressing, this reads a bit like an Animal Liberation press release to push their agenda. Something needs to be done to address this.
 * Done.
 * A picture, while not required, would be nice.
 * Done.
 * An infobox, while not required, would be nice.
 * Added Australia.

Now found the place too.. --Gryllida 05:19, 21 March 2013 (UTC)