Talk:Anti-abortion activist Bernard Nathanson dies aged 84

Review of revision 1183694 [Passed]
This article has weaselly wording: "During his time as an obstetrician it is believed that he was involved in nearly 75,000 abortions". This evasive wording is unnecessary as the source states that he estimated this number. Mattisse (talk) 15:59, 23 February 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the weaselly wording I complained about above and made other small copy edits. I was surprised that it "passed" for publication with such poor writing. This article implies that he died on February 23. It does not state that he died on February 21. Mattisse (talk) 16:44, 24 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Although I'm not sure I agree it implies the 23rd, I wholehearted agree it's atrocious that the when basic question wasn't answered by the lede. It's one of the easiest of the questions to answer, and omitting it is a nasty habit that should be rooted out at Wikinews.  --Pi zero (talk) 17:41, 24 February 2011 (UTC)

Edit request
editprotected Please all Category:Conservatism

Thanks! Lionelt (talk) 10:08, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
 * ❌ as the category has been deleted. — μchip08 10:53, 5 July 2011 (UTC)