Talk:Arthur Ochs Sulzberger, former publisher of The New York Times, dies aged 86

Er
Clearly some copyediting will be needed here; whether it's within range for an independent review is harder to say without closer scrutiny. Some points that catch the eye:
 * According to his family Sulzberger had a long illness.
 * One wonders when this illness was, in relation to his death.


 * Sulzberger left the chief executive position and succeeded to his son
 * Um. succeed.


 * United States President Barack Obama said, "he was saddened by news of Sulzberger's death."
 * This begs the question of who Obama was referring to when Obama said "he".


 * An assistant managing editor for the New York Times, Jim Roberts said that the publisher's death is a "monumental contributor to journalism."
 * Say what?

--Pi zero (talk) 02:52, 1 October 2012 (UTC)