Talk:Australian teenager sentenced to three months in jail for graffiti

Five W's already stated
The where has already been stated look at the beinning of the article "a SYDNEY teenager". ~andimahony
 * Where was the teenager arrested, not where is the teenager from. I have to run, but I will give you more help in an hour or so. --SVTCobra 21:23, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

I will try and clean it up if I have time. --SVTCobra 22:29, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Regarding the title:
 * the news isn't the arrest (that was a month ago), the news is that the teenager has been sentenced to 3 months prison
 * the girl's name shouldn't be in the title, she is not known previously
 * Categories can be added at the bottom of the article by adding  and more.
 * "Chinese television station CCTV captured Cheyene defacing the wall" seems to be false.


 * Andimahony, I have done my cleanup. If you look at the edit history, you will see what improvements I felt were necessary before submitting for review. They are not insignificant. We are all volunteers here at Wikinews and you cannot expect that every article that you submit will get fixed on your behalf. We just don't have the manpower. You can only improve your chances of getting published by developing the articles more fully yourself. Cheers and good luck in the future. --SVTCobra 02:36, 4 February 2009 (UTC)