Talk:British police charge taxi driver with murder

article needs copy editing
e.g. "Various tributes have made to Sian O'Callaghan since her death" and "An event held on Saturday night saw the release of hundreds of balloons and Chinese lanterns." (How can an event "saw the release"? Do events "see"?) Mattisse (talk) 10:05, 28 March 2011 (UTC)
 * P.S. How important are reports of local crimes with no significance outside the immediate location. Isn't this tabloid-like reporting. Easy enough to write, hundreds a day, but how important? Mattisse (talk) 10:13, 28 March 2011 (UTC)