Talk:British soldier released after serving 12 years of life sentence for Cyprus killing

My first article, so I need a little help: First of all, i'm not completely familiar with the Style guide, so their must be passages where i need to be helped out :o) I also have some problems with writing the sources correct. Ritzau is not the author, but the news agency. The categories are still missing, and then, i'm not a native english speaker, so please correct the spelling and sentences that makes no sence ;) rwl 22:23, 14 August 2006 (UTC)


 * Is this article ready to be published, or is there more, that should be done? rwl 23:23, 14 August 2006 (UTC)


 * I published it now. You are lucky that I speak Danish. I did a major overhaul and added a second English-language source. --SVTCobra 23:56, 14 August 2006 (UTC)

Title change
Please change to "British soldier released, serves half-sentence for Cyprus killing", or similar. The inclusion of "only" implies POV.
 * acknowledged. --SVTCobra 02:12, 15 August 2006 (UTC)


 * The English Wikipedia has a short article about her. Link perhaps? See w:Louise Jensen. --en:User:Valentinian 01:33, 28 November 2006 (UTC)