Talk:Bus explosion in Armenian capital kills two

Review of revision 4209630 [Not ready]
Thanks for your help. I have edited my article and attributed all of my sources. Sorry, this is my first time using Wikinews and it's taking me some time to get used to it. I put everything in my own words and put it through a plagiarism checker, so hopefully it all works out! Please let me know if you need me to do anything else. Thanks!Tia UOW (talk) 15:28, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Nice, Tia UOW! ANGwiki (talk) 21:03, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Ironically, when I did a preliminary scan for passages too-close-to-source, the one thing that turned up was the one passage I'd specifically mentioned in my review comments &mdash; unchanged, except for a bit of "scuffing up", just what I was saying does not help. I'll see what I can do about that during review; provided there's nothing much else problematic, it may be something I can handle without compromising my independence for review.  --Pi zero (talk) 14:05, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Two other potential snags I've noticed, so far:
 * There appears to have been a significant further development in the story; as an independent reviewer, I basically can't add stuff, so the question becomes whether a credibly publishable article can be produced by cutting stuff out, without adding in the new development. Don't know yet.
 * Numbeo content is, I gather, crowdsourced. What that implies for its useability for this purpose, I'm considering.
 * --Pi zero (talk) 14:46, 27 April 2016 (UTC)