Talk:California court sentences parents who kept their children in captivity

New York Times
Heads-up, Qwerty. The reviewers around here usually treat the NYT as a paywalled source because of that five-article-a-month limit. Darkfrog24 (talk) 21:53, 19 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Post! I see the source is actually the post and that "New York Times" was a typo.  Fixed. Darkfrog24 (talk) 02:37, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

I really.......
...want this article to pass review, but it has some MAJOR deficits regarding style, tone and voice. I don't fancy myself a person who likes to slam other peoples' English fluency, but the contributor has some entertaining user boxes on their page, espousing their mastery of English and from the likes of this article, such mastery is suspect. Nevertheless, one appreciates contributions here (trying is trying, after all) so I will over the next hour or so, try to clean this up a wee bit. --Bddpaux (talk) 01:09, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

Children
It appears they had 13 but admitted they tortured 12. Qwerty number1 (talk) 07:24, 20 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks. --Pi zero (talk) 21:38, 20 April 2019 (UTC)