Talk:California lawyer Michael Avenatti convicted of attempted extortion

Headline
We'll want to tweak this a bit; I don't think an international reader can be assume to know Avenatti or Nike. --Pi zero (talk) 06:19, 15 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Renamed --DannyS712 (talk) 06:24, 15 February 2020 (UTC)

Who
in the lede. I added the country of California, and an explanation of who Donald Trump is; Daniels and Nike still need explanation. Since there's a greater range of possible explanations of those, I figure it's better for my independence if I can avoid dabbling in them. --Pi zero (talk) 13:37, 15 February 2020 (UTC)
 * --Pi zero (talk) 16:47, 15 February 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --DannyS712 (talk) 20:18, 15 February 2020 (UTC)