Talk:Church of England threatens legal action over PS3 game

I just created this article. It is the first wikinews article and I've attempted so I apologise if I've got anything wrong (I did read the guidlines and try to follow them). I'm not sure if I need more sources but the BBC article did cite another article (from a newspaper) itself. --81.154.126.42 (AKA: Bisected8) 13:15, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
 * yup its a nice article, esp for your first!! well done.  unfortunately though it does need more sources before it can be published. --Mark Talk 13:42, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Most of the news articles I've found seem to claim the game contains a "shootout between hundreds of soldiers", when its really more 5-6 soldiers trying to fight off aliens, would adding this be considered bias and/or original reporting?--Bisected8 14:17, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Contradicting the sources for this article without adding a validative source of your own for this fact would indeed not be such a good idea. (Perhaps they're counting the number of aliens as soldiers?) &mdash;BlackTerror 18:41, 9 June 2007 (UTC)

EDIT: I've added two new sources (a conservative tabloid and a games news site) and incorporated the information from them into the article, is this adequate?
 * Well, I think it is, anyway. Good work! Blood Red Sandman  (Talk)   (Contribs) 15:50, 9 June 2007 (UTC)