Talk:Colin Powell Resigns as U.S. Secretary of State, Rice Likely Successor/Review

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 * yep. Lyellin 17:41, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Is the article accurate and have sources been cited?
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The article is accurate, but the sources were not strictly primary sources. I have added links to the briefing Powell made regarding his resignation and the copy of his letter made available by the State Department. It may be worth going through the briefing and raising some of the queries mentioned therein in this article prior to publication. --BenM 05:19, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

The article is inaccurate or misleading as its use of words like "replacement", "chosen" and "successor" for Rice and Gonzales implies that they will automatically be filling the post. In fact this is not certain. Rice and Gonzales are currently only nominees, and must first be confirmed by the U.S. Senate. See google news searches for "gonzales confirmation" or "rice confirmation". -- en:User:KeithTyler


 * Is the current version better in this regard?--Eloquence


 * Looks good to me, there's a clear trail of where reports regarding Rice's appointment has come from (Reuters citing senior BushCo types). Even if someone else (e.g. Wolfowitz) gets the job, the statement is still valid because we're only reporting what some officials are tipping.  --BenM 16:56, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)
 * Better now. Lyellin 17:41, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

The article assumed that other Bush administration officials were "hawkish" - a term that implies an aggressive desire for war and/or exploitation. Better to cite a source which holds this view. It's a matter of considerable dispute whether Bush et al. actually favored or desired war -- or just felt it was a last resort and were reluctant. Despite countless hours of research -- including reading insider books like Misunderestimated by Bill Sammon, I've been unable to find any proof that ANYONE on the Bush team preferred war over diplomacy. If we can find evidence of this, this would not flip us from unsure to sure - but from unsure to NEUTRAL. That is, we should say that some sources indicate the Bush team preferred diplomacy, while other sources indicate that some of them wanted war all along.

Note that it is primarily US Democrats and other anti-Bush advocates who pro mate the POV that Bush et al. wanted war all along. Unless Wikinews is planning to adopt an anti-Bush POV as its official policy, I hope to nip this sort of thing in the bud. We should be neutral, or this project will fail. Ed Poor 15:51, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

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 * Seems to be. Lyellin 17:41, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

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The style guide specifies past tense, but the article makes heavy use of present perfect ("has resigned", "has been chosen"). - en:User:KeithTyler


 * Present perfect seems acceptable to me. I've amended the style guide accordingly. What do you think?--Eloquence 16:49, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)
 * I think it's alright. First paragraph is a little shaky though. Lyellin 17:41, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)

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 * Yes. Lyellin 17:41, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC)