Talk:Egypt opens Rafah border crossing sporadically during Gaza crisis

Headline
Current headline,
 * Egypt is opening Rafah border crossing sporadically for the transfer of injured and aid but is reluctant to advance a cease fire between Israel and the Gaza Strip

is way too long; somebody (reporter, reviewer, anyone) is going to have to work out a way to make it a lot shorter; should be less than half current length. --Pi zero (talk) 21:55, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
 * First pass, did simple stuff, no meaning change. Now
 * Egypt opening Rafah border crossing sporadically for Gaza injured and aid&#59; reluctant to advance a cease fire
 * Still too long, but it's a start. --Pi zero (talk) 23:42, 12 July 2014 (UTC)