Talk:Elizabeth Warren endorses Joe Biden in 2020 US presidential election

Length
can you expand this a bit? It is supposed to be at least three paragraphs. If you don't have time or want me to try and add to it, I can, but since you're the author I thought I should run it by you first --DannyS712 (talk) 23:25, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
 * The first paragraph is also too long, with too much detail in it. --Pi zero (talk) 23:30, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Sure, I'll see what I can do. --Ixfd64 (talk) 23:43, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I've made some changes. Your feedback would be much appreciated. --Ixfd64 (talk) 00:02, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * The article length is better. The lede is still much too long and too detailed.  Note that shortening the lede is not (necessarily) about removing information from the article; it's about what belongs in the lede and what should be in some later paragraph in the inverted pyramid. --Pi zero (talk) 00:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Review of revision 4559630 [Passed]

 * Yeah, I wanted to replace the first part with "Some considered Warren a top candidate [...]" but couldn't find any information in the sources on who "some" was. --Ixfd64 (talk) 16:24, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Updates
Can this be added using Update to Bloomberg, Warren end US presidential campaigns following Super Tuesday? --DannyS712 (talk) 17:17, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Good idea. --Pi zero (talk) 17:27, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Done. --Pi zero (talk) 17:31, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Typo
editprotected "she was was endorsing" -> "she was endorsing". Minorax (talk) 08:54, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --DannyS712 (talk) 08:58, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ...though you should have been able to edit the article yourself --DannyS712 (talk) 09:00, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Ah. Misread the log. Thanks anyway :) Minorax (talk) 09:03, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Drat. I can't believe I missed the opportunity to use the edit summary: "unlike the intended 'was', 'was was' was used". c.f. w:James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher --DannyS712 (talk) 09:06, 19 April 2020 (UTC)