Talk:Former U.S. Senator Norm Coleman diagnosed with Bell's palsy

One line paragraphs?
Can any of the sentences be merged together? 75.72.27.74 (talk) (→ Zachary ) 04:15, 11 September 2009 (UTC)

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Thanks for the comments Cirt. I'll do what I can to fix the problems. I'll see if I can't find a second source, but this was an exclusive, but has most likely been picked up on other local media outlets. Calebrw (talk) 23:27, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Think I got it fixed up nicely. Removed some em dashes and added a second source. Calebrw (talk) 23:40, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment: I still don't see the need for the use of dashes in the first and second paragraphs. Cirt (talk) 03:31, 12 September 2009 (UTC)