Talk:Four people shot in parking lot of Wal-Mart store north of Austin, Texas

Some initial sources on this item All this sources of a distinct lack of details in common; however here are coomon key points: --Mozillaman (talk) 00:03, 20 August 2012 (UTC)
 * http://www.chron.com/news/article/4-shot-in-Central-Texas-Walmart-parking-lot-3799439.php
 * http://www.cnn.com/2012/08/19/us/texas-walmart-shooting/index.html
 * http://www.kwtx.com/home/headlines/Four-Shot-At-Texas-Walmart-Store-166695986.html
 * http://www.sacbee.com/2012/08/19/4739273/4-shot-at-central-texas-walmart.html
 * http://www.statesman.com/blogs/content/shared-gen/blogs/austin/blotter/entries/2012/08/19/multiple_people_hospitalized_i.html (local source)
 * 1) The shooting took place in a
 * 2) Four people were shot
 * 3) All injuries were non-life-threatening
 * 4) Cedar Park Police Capt. Mike Harmon said authorities arrived around 4:30AM local time
 * 5) The suspect was also injured and hospitalized, being arrested at the scene.
 * 6) Soloman Onwukaife was charged with aggravated assault with a deadly weapon and is 18 years old
 * 7) Nothing will keep a Walmart closed, it re-opened later the same morning.
 * "All of these sources seem to share a lack of specific details in common." Can't seem to English today. Anyways, last link contains the most detail but is a single source. --Mozillaman (talk) 00:04, 20 August 2012 (UTC)

Wal-Mart is now Walmart
Not sure if anyone will care about the hyphen; but Wal-Mart stores are all Walmart stores since 2008.

Review of revision 1593256 [Not ready]

 * Trimmed down the lead and re-factored pretty much everything in this revision to hopefully improve readability and also minimize copyright issues. "Gunshots rang out" was also removed. FM is "Farm-to-Market"; I almost included it spelled out in this revision but a local would never use "Farm-to-Market" and I'm not sure spelling it out is strictly needed. Feel free to replace it with "Farm-to-Market" if you feel it would be a dramatic help. --Mozillaman (talk) 13:34, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * The close paraphrase was my fault, I was tired, lazy or both at the time. I took out FM.....I'm very loosely familiar with the area, and listing the Highway is good enough, considering location. Mozillaman, I thought you were Canadian.....how the heck would you know what "locals" might never say?? :]       --Bddpaux (talk) 16:27, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Talked to a more southerly friend for advice ;) --Mozillaman (talk) 16:58, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm going to re-review this now. At-issue isn't what the locals might say, it is making it clear to an international audience. Here in the UK we'd call that a Farmer's Market, although I'm sure there are other names that might be more-apt for an international audience. --Brian McNeil / talk 12:48, 22 August 2012 (UTC)

photo ?
Why does this story contain a photo of a Kahr pistol? Was one used in the shooting? If not, it should be removed, or else we should also add file photos of a Walmart and of a party where alcohol is being served. -136.227.31.36 (talk) 20:02, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Removed. No need to offer the hyperbole in terms of a challenge. --Brian McNeil / talk 20:15, 22 August 2012 (UTC)