Talk:France fears serial killer responsible for recent murders

Style
Per Wikinews' style guide, articles should be a minimum of three paragraphs, presented in Inverted pyramid structure, and use active voice.

It is also recommended, to speed the review process, that you include html comments marking facts and quotes in the article with a note of which specific source they are taken from. Thanks for any help you can give in making reviewing easier! --Brian McNeil / talk 12:48, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

The paragraphs are not in Wikinew style. Look at other examples, like Last Ottoman dies, aged 91. Short paragraphs is a relative term per medium and outlet. In magazine writing, you always look at the style of the organization. It's a good approach in general when you move from one style to another. Crtew (talk) 15:14, 8 April 2012 (UTC)