Talk:Government shuts off water to California farms in controversial effort to help threatened species

Review of revision 860254 [Failed]
Thanks for the review. Aside from slapping the story down as anti-government, which is hard not to do considering that the Federal Government is basically making a farming town extinct (which is why it is a story), and the style, did you have any suggestions for content or style? DavidBailey (talk) 00:40, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've tried to tone down the article and renamed the article to meet the naming conventions. How about any other suggestions? I think this story is amazing. DavidBailey (talk) 00:54, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much for the changes you made. It is much better now. Sorry if my review was terse. I was at work and didn't have time to elaborate. --SVTCobra 02:03, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Review of revision 860990 [Passed]
Yeah, I noticed it had been ongoing for a while, but the fact that the unemployment is up to 40% and town police chiefs are talking about the town disappearing make the story worth visiting, I think. DavidBailey (talk) 02:34, 13 August 2009 (UTC)