Talk:Grand Theft Auto under fire

I am the original writer of the story, so it's okay to use it (regarding the copyright deal). Any additional questions can be sent to my email, Stein@GTACentral.com. Thanks for your concern though.
 * Verified via e-mail --Cspurrier 23:54, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

POV
This article appears to have a very strong stance in favor of the game; it uses disparaging words towards those with criticism of the game. I don't believe it's ready to be published. -- IlyaHaykinson 01:55, July 17, 2005 (UTC)

I went ahead and made an NPOV pass at the article, remove the POV tag if you feel this was adequate --24.129.198.129 02:52, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

:)
My son was all eyes when I showed him your story. He's 22. -Edbrown05 02:34, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

Title
The title doesn't quite encompass the entire grasp of the story. Once it is finished with development I would recomend renaming it to something such as "Bill Proposed to Give a Bite to ESRB Ratings" and then reordering/editing the content of the article. --24.129.198.129 02:58, 17 July 2005 (UTC)
 * Noted. I hope this story doesn't get sapped undr legalism. I wonder where the most interest in this kind of story comes from... the game players (my vote), or concerned parents?
 * I think the title is fine. -Edbrown05 03:27, 18 July 2005 (UTC)

other games
What I don't understand is that nowhere can I find mention of something like God of War (rated M), which has sex scenes in the game that don't even require modding. --CGW 12:40, 21 July 2005 (UTC)

Hilary Clinton
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Needs a crosslink
This article doesn't link to Stores drop game "Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas" after given 'Adults Only' rating, even though it links here. I'd add it myself but the page is protected(?!?) so, um, yeah. Garrett 11:44, 16 August 2005 (UTC)

Other
Video game's secret sex scenes spark outrage