Talk:Halema`uma`u crater erupts in Hawaii, USA

I was there and took the images myself


 * That's great. Can you think of better title? One that explains where and what this is in laymans terms. --SVTCobra 03:13, 19 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Please see Original reporting for how to document events that you witnessed yourself, though the photographic evidence is impressive. --SVTCobra 03:40, 19 April 2008 (UTC)


 * This seems to me to be pretty close to ready but there is a problem with this sentence: "There were two more explosions on April 9 2008 and April 16 2008 April 11 2008." too many dates --SVTCobra 11:14, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Corrected! Thank you.--Mbz1 - (talk) 13:38, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * BTW, the "News in Pictures" section should be updated? Brock contact... 08:01, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * ✅ --SVTCobra 00:29, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

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I was there for 10 days and took many images at different days. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mbz1 (talk • contribs) 04:51, 19 April 2008 (UTC)