Talk:Hezbollah fires rockets at the Golan Heights

Notes for reviewer
I have included in-line citations as, which can be seen using the source editor. —Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 16:05, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

Pre-review
Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 17:47, 16 July 2024 (UTC)


 * "350,000 reservists" is not obvious, no. That paragraph has passed review so many times that I just assumed it was verified.
 * I actually do think Israel declared war might be classified as obvious though. And apparently the number is 360,000. Do you think this warrants a correction on previous usages of this or similar paragraphs.
 * 6,000 rockets claim has also been removed.@Michael.C.Wright Me Da Wikipedian (talk) 03:35, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
 * I don't think repetitiveness is an issue. To clarify &mdash; material can be copied, including verbatim, from a previously published article; the published article can be cited via the Related news section in place of its sources. Apparently there was some doubt about the reservist number during the review of what I think was the first article to mention it, in May. Yeah, if the source(s) you've been using to verify 350,000 number actually support 360,000, have been corrected themselves, or we can establish the number was 360,000 through new sourcing, corrections to the previous articles are definitely called for. Israel having declared war (I think the technical wording from the security cabinet was a declaration of a state of war) is not obvious. They could be fighting an undeclared war, which they've done before. Heavy Water (talk) 06:38, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Washington Post verifies declaration of war anyways so...@Heavy Water Me Da Wikipedian (talk) 13:31, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
 * The new WaPo article verifies the declaration of war and the 360k reservists mobilized. I've updated my recommendation. —Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 15:24, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you. You might want to also update the revesion evaluated...@Michael.C.Wright Me Da Wikipedian (talk) 15:26, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Already done. 👍 —Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 15:47, 17 July 2024 (UTC)