Talk:Indian cricketer Sehwag announces international retirement

Review of revision 3912955 [Not ready]
I've added some more details, and added back in a few words of quotation in reactions from fellow players. While I agree that there was too much quoted at the time of the first review, some indication of what his colleagues said is appropriate I think. I've also attempted to improve the article with some copyediting etc and hope that someone can review this soon - I now can't as I'm too involved! Bencherlite (talk) 10:57, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Great job,, thank you very much for your help ! I agree with you both that there was too much quoted, before, and that some quotes are helpful and your improvements are helpful and quite beneficial. It looks like a 2nd Review is currently taking place by . Good luck, -- Cirt (talk) 12:20, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Move request
Please Move the page to Indian cricketer Sehwag announces retirement 14.139.242.195 (talk) 08:43, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅, great new title ! -- Cirt (talk) 10:15, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Actually, he's not retiring from all forms of the game so this title is misleading. Pinging  in the hope that he sees this before publishing. Bencherlite (talk) 13:31, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Would inserting 'international' save it? Seems that's the "most important and unique thing." Indian cricketer Sehwag announces internetional retirement? BRS  (Talk)   (Contribs) 13:35, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * I think you mean "Indian cricketer Sehwag announces international retirement" (methinks you type "internet" too often!), which would work. Bencherlite (talk) 13:42, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * My thanks to you both. :) -- Cirt (talk) 15:38, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Lol. BRS  (Talk)   (Contribs) 01:30, 22 October 2015 (UTC)