Talk:Iraq: Shootings, bombings kill dozens in Baghdad, Baquba, Qiyara, Madaen

Review of revision 1975633 [Not ready]
Thanks! Theonesean (talk) 02:12, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "said to be oppressing" removed
 * "has led to fears" changed
 * "causing widespread Middle Eastern conflict" I don't understand why that's an issue. Clashes between Sunni, Shia, and (to a lesser extent) Kurdish people has been one of the root causes of conflict. It's mentioned in three of the sources, but, if need be, I could bring in hundreds of background sources for just that one statement. Sunni and Shia Muslims have had a history of conflict. That is one of the bases for the current Middle East situation.
 * "bolstered by the Syrian civil war" removed


 * I've made a number of extensive changes, and am consequently disqualified from review.


 * My hope is that perhaps the changes I've made may be useful in illustrating some of the problems that existed and how they might have been approached differently.


 * Because I was concentrating on details as I entered the source-check, I'm aware of having lost track of the big picture of this story, and am now saturated; I fear the article may not do well at portraying the story as a whole, but I can't tell atm; and I fear I'm also too close to see whether I've introduced new problems. Which is part of why extensive involvement in an article disqualifies a reviewer from reviewing it.  --Pi zero (talk) 00:32, 27 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Pi, thanks for helping out. I'm sure someone will review it soon. I hope so at least. From where I stand, it looks very good and does a good job summarizing the picture. Thanks, Theonesean (talk) 02:16, 27 August 2013 (UTC)