Talk:Job market in France suffers as unemployment rate hits fifteen year high

Comments
Some things I can see immediately: --Pi zero (talk) 03:38, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Links within the article should use ..., not ....
 * Date format in the Sources section doesn't follow the style guide, WN:SG.
 * There should be, at minimum, a country category (and the continent category it belongs to) and a section category (in this case, that'd be Category:Economy and business.
 * There should be an infobox; likely, either Economy and business or France.
 * Places and people should be linked on first occurrence, Such as France.

Attribution problem
I notice there are several passages here that need attribution. When you say "it was predicted/believed/assumed ...", this begs the question, predicted/believed/assumed by whom? Moreover, if the answer isn't very specific, there may be a problem with whether it can really be verified (even if a source says it, if the source appears to have been handwaving, one has to stop and think about whether the source is simply projecting its own expectations). --16:36, 8 June 2013 (UTC)