Talk:Kentucky lawmaker in critical condition after fight in high school cafeteria

Review of revision 1213654 [Failed]
Please review WN:STYLE for more information. Other reviewers, feel free to re-review if you disagree with my assessment, as this is my first article that I have reviewed. Phearson (talk) 20:47, 15 April 2011 (UTC)

Issues
You did not say what was wrong with the style. I cannot fix the problem if you don't tell me what it is. Tadpole256 (talk) 21:11, 15 April 2011 (UTC)

Wkipedia Article
Just aknowledging that I have used the text and sources from this story to update the Wikipedia Dewayne Bunch article, as per this edit. Usually it's the other way around. Credit given on talk page amd Edit summary there - 220.101 talk\Contribs 10:47, 17 April 2011 (UTC)