Talk:Lockdown at Missouri university lifted as police apprehend suspected gunman

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Is confused, strange and overly long. Blood Red Sandman (Talk)   (Contribs) 19:19, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Reworded, how about this?  — fetch · comms  20:28, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Vastly improved, ty :) Blood Red Sandman  (Talk)   (Contribs) 20:29, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Now just looking for a review >.>  — fetch · comms  20:36, 12 May 2011 (UTC)