Talk:More than 300 arrested in over two days after US drug operation

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Is this the as-given VOA title? More than 300 arrested in over two days after US drug operation. It's painfully awkward. --Brian McNeil / talk 00:50, 24 October 2009 (UTC)
 * My thought precisely - but I'm reluctant to move a published article. (the first thing I would drop is the "over" two days - either its two days, or three ( or more) days). And probably either "two days" or "in/after US drug operation" would be fine, rather than both. Sean Heron (talk) 20:39, 24 October 2009 (UTC)