Talk:Nationwide unrest continues for sixth night in France following fatal shooting of Nahel Merzouk

Review of revision 4735168 [Not ready]

 * Oh, I see you added a second source for the focal event as I was reviewing. Heavy Water (talk) 14:54, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

5th?
From June 29 to July 3, it is the fifth night. Asked42 (talk) 15:05, 3 July 2023 (UTC)


 * I think Tuesday (the 27th and when Merzouk was shot) was when the riots started; Reuters says of last night "Sixth night of riots sees fewer arrests, 300 cars torched". Heavy Water (talk) 15:21, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Ok, implementing. Asked42 (talk) 15:33, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Looking a bit better on cohesion/focus. I may do a review.--Bddpaux (talk) 16:19, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Please check your talk page.--Bddpaux (talk) 16:27, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
 * As of this moment, in a holding pattern... waiting for answer to question.--Bddpaux (talk) 16:29, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Yeah. The headline is still unfocused though. Maybe "France: Nationwide unrest following police killing of Nahel Merzouk continues for sixth night"? That would also clarify the shooting was fatal and the killing was by police, not of police. Heavy Water (talk) 16:42, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Clarified that sentence and modified headline. All source articles checked.--Bddpaux (talk) 17:03, 3 July 2023 (UTC)