Talk:Nearly 500,000 people protest on Mohammed Morsi's first anniversary as president

Neutrality
Don't exaggerate, and avoid purple prose. "overrun". "flooded the streets". --Pi zero (talk) 23:13, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed Surfer43 (talk) 03:32, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

Pictures
Can anyone find some free pictures for this article? Surfer43 (talk) 00:38, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd suggest the photo of Morsi that Wikipedia uses or you can pick one to use from the Wikimedia Commons category Category:Mohamed Morsi. Alternatively, you could pick a map of Egypt to pinpoint the locations of the several cities. Or you can also use a photo of the cities of Cairo, Alexandria, etc. or of Tahrir Square as well, perhaps. — Mike moral  ♪♫  03:19, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, I added a picture of him, although I'm keeping an eye on . Surfer43 (talk) 03:55, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * You could ask for permission from the uploader of this or ask him to relicense the image to CC-BY/CC-BY-SA for use on Wikinews. It seems to depict the protest pretty well, imo. — Mike moral  ♪♫  03:59, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * ✅ I messaged him.

How to put English translation of Tamarod in article
Right now the article says "Tamarod(English: Rebellion)", which doesn't seem right. Any suggestions? Surfer43 (talk) 00:45, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia calls it the "Rebel movement". — Mike moral  ♪♫  03:20, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

I edited since you started
I'm sorry, I didn't realize I wasn't supposed to, because I started the edit before you(Pi zero) started reviewing. Now the article is written from today, so it is newer. Surfer43 (talk) 14:05, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


 * It happens. Thanks for noting it here.


 * I'm going to pause, and plan to come back in maybe half an hour. I've taken it out from under review for the interim.  --Pi zero (talk) 14:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Predictably, other things have taken me longer than I'd anticipated. I still hope to get back to this reasonably soon (but now it's lunchtime here).  --Pi zero (talk) 15:59, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

Number of protesters
Some sources have said there were "tens of thousands", one "nearly 500,000", and a few "millions". I thought 500,000 was probably the most accurate, as others were written as if exaggerated. "Millions" is pretty vague. Surfer43 (talk) 14:08, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


 * The trick with news is to avoid saying anything one isn't really sure of. A key technique is attribution.  For example, suppose David Cameron makes a controversial claim.  We cann't assert the claim as fact, as the assertion would violate our neutrality policy, but we can assert with confidence that David Cameron claimed it.  Sometimes it's also possible to sidestep a certain amount of controversy by simply introducing a small amount of vagueness.


 * How all this applies to this article, I don't know clearly since I haven't yet undertaken source-checking, but these are good principles to keep in mind. --Pi zero (talk) 14:23, 1 July 2013 (UTC)