Talk:New York business receives package containing unknown powder

Review 2
This article is unreadable due to incredibly bad grammar. It should not have been published until it was copyedited. This is why googlenews doesn't like us. Low quality.Gopher65talk 01:02, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Good job otherwise though:). It's nice to have OR articles like this, where people actually go out and do reporting. Gopher65talk 01:08, 22 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Well I did copyedit it. I did the best I could, and you only made all of 4 or 5 fairly minor corrections.   -- Shakata Ga Nai  ^_^ 02:03, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
 * My corrections were mostly moving commas around and such, and that kind of thing doesn't show up well in the "compare versions":). Gopher65talk 02:14, 22 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Sorry about the "poor grammar". But I think it's better than this high quality news about the same thing:http://www.wivb.com/global/story.asp?s=9206993, and we scooped them by one minute :) Paranormal Skeptic (talk) 13:09, 22 October 2008 (UTC)