Talk:New Zealand begins process to consider changing national flag design

Review of revision 3480665 [Not ready]
Thanks for your comments Pi Zero. I hope the lede is better now. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by ThatGirlFromUOW (talk • contribs) 10:52, 7 May 2015‎
 * It seems clear to me that that last review was a failure on my part: I demonstrably failed to explain clearly enough what the problem was.  I've also discussed it with someone else offline, and they didn't understand what I was objecting to either.  And I'm really not inclined to hold up this article for another whole day, endangering its freshness, in order to make a second attempt at something I've already demonstrated I don't really know how to do.  So I'm going to try really hard to find another solution to the problem.  --Pi zero (talk) 11:57, 7 May 2015 (UTC)