Talk:Oldest user of Twitter, Ivy Bean, dies at 104

Review of revision 1067605 [Failed]
How can anyone show bias towards this story, "Oldest Twit waists electricity by using internet" BKCW8''' talk


 * POV is not solely the case where one is advocating for/supporting an ideological or emotional position; it is also when one romanticizes a given set of events or actions, or otherwise makes statements of fact which are actually conjecture or opinion. For example, from this article:
 * "Long thought to be the oldest user..."
 * "who were all informed of her passing..."
 * This sentence contains 3 statements of fact, which in fact are opinions or subjective statements: "Prior to being the oldest person on Twitter, in 2008 Bean became the oldest person on Facebook which is where she first became an internet phenomenon."
 * "Among her fans and followers, were Peter Andre - who she had met and often talked about, and Chris Evans." <- While these persons may demonstrably be fans and followers, the statement implies value judgments about both the persons and that they would be fans/followers.
 * -  Amgine | t 07:30, 29 July 2010 (UTC)

I cant help but think you're being needlessly pedantic, but i'll try cleaning up the story to your liking BKCW8''' talk  07:38, 29 July 2010 (UTC)

THERE! It has been bettered BKCW8''' talk  08:13, 29 July 2010 (UTC)

Front-page worthy?
This doesn't seem like it is something that deserves to be in Lead 2. --Thunderhead (t - e - c) 04:51, 30 July 2010 (UTC)