Talk:Parajet Skycar expedition takes off from London to Timbuktu

I CREATED this news article on expedition of fairytale scope by travelling from London to Timbuktu in a flying car. Please help me IN COLLABORATION in improving the style of writing to have this published. Cheers. --Florentino Floro (talk) 08:00, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Review? --72.65.121.250 22:58, 20 January 2009 (UTC)