Talk:Peltola defeats Palin, Begich in Alaska special election for US House of Representatives

Review of revision 4688754 [Not ready]
Don't forget to resubmit for a second review once you feel you have made the required improvements to the article. Cheers, --SVTCobra 22:50, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
 * I think I fixed the source issue, but I wasn't exactly sure what the formatting issues were. I added some categories and made some of the paragraphs shorter. Is there anything else in the formatting that needs to be fixed? Thank you, Bigfluffycow (talk) 14:31, 4 September 2022 (UTC)
 * , I made some changes which I felt were necessary. I obviously don't know exactly what JJ is looking for, but I resubmitted for review. --SVTCobra 16:44, 4 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey, big improvements. Love it. Should be ready for publication now, just wanted to add that this article has a lot of potential in terms of being more substantial: perhaps mentioning Palin's history as McCain's running mate or some of the quotes in AP, or the significance insofar as being the first Alaska Native, Alaskans last voting a Democrat for president in 1964 &c. That's what distinguishes a good article from a GREAT article. If nothing else is done in maybe six hours I'll gladly publish. But that's my opinion. JJLiu112 (talk) 20:19, 4 September 2022 (UTC)