Talk:Polish authorities arrest Israeli agent

This is a Polish and Israeli hide and seek matter, of course!--Sainsf :) 08:05, 13 June 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1043321 [Failed]

 * Hmm, but how else are we going to phrase that, avoiding the number? "The Friday before last" sounds rather awkward, saying June 4 makes more sense and is clearer. Tempodivalse [talk]  16:37, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Fourth of this month? C'mon! The thing is littered with redundancy, the sources aren't per WN:SG, and that howler in the opening. --Brian McNeil / talk 16:41, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * I was in the middle of copy-editing it when you failed it; how I had it was "Polish authorities arrested an Israeli "spy" using the pseudonym Uri Brodsky on June 4 in connection with the murder of Mahmoud al-Mabhouh." C628 (talk) 16:42, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * -shrug- I actually think using the month name is okay as well and shorter, but whatever. Source format fixed as well, resubmitted for review. Tempodivalse [talk]  16:44, 13 June 2010 (UTC)


 * I'd have opened with 'earlier this month' and given the exact date in the 2nd or 3rd paragraph. Blood Red Sandman  (Talk)   (Contribs) 16:46, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Exactly. --Brian McNeil / talk 17:24, 13 June 2010 (UTC)