Talk:Riots in Hamburg, Germany injure dozens

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 * Thanks for your in-depth review. I've tried to address the concerns listed, could you have another look at it? Thanks. Tempodivalse [talk]  00:08, 14 September 2009 (UTC)


 * No problem -- interesting article. I just made a couple edits (suggestions, really) -- do those seem like improvements to you? I'll go ahead and publish if you approve of them, but would prefer to know if they sit well with you first! -Peteforsyth (talk) 01:27, 14 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Yep, your edits are fine with me. The story's now a bit on the short side - only three paragraphs - but I think it's large enough for publishing. Thanks again for your suggestion and edit! Tempodivalse [talk]  02:01, 14 September 2009 (UTC)

Wikipedia links, possibly relevant

 * National Democratic Party of Germany
 * Boroughs and quarters of Hamburg
 * Altona, Hamburg
 * Neo-Nazism

-Peteforsyth (talk) 00:05, 14 September 2009 (UTC)