Talk:Royal wedding delayed as Prince plans for Pope's funeral

Nice cleanup, EdB... --HiFlyer 21:15, 4 Apr 2005 (UTC) First para now has too many sentences and sounds staccato. I like more 'flow' in paras, if you know what I mean. So I will change that.

Other than that I like your changes to active voice, etc. --HiFlyer 21:38, 4 Apr 2005 (UTC)