Talk:Russian journalist Viktor Pinchuk delivers 'Hobo Tourism' lecture in Simferopol, Crimea

Review of revision 4690611 [Not ready]

 * The style has not remotely been rectified. What I will try to do, is simply edit it to more closely fit with our style here. There is, admittedly, a bit of a learning curve here, but we are glad to have you.--Bddpaux (talk) 00:05, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Did a few bits of cleanup. I am now FAR out of reviewer territory, so someone else will have to take over. If for nothing other than entertainment, check out his submission over a WikiBooks: it is entertaining. By American standards, it is a wee bit odd, but I am far from Anti-Bohemian! Travelling on the cheap is an art unto itself! ...and many people who've done it have some cool stories! Anyway: I think this article has potential, but still needs to some hard work on it to meet up with journalistic standards.--Bddpaux (talk) 00:26, 18 September 2022 (UTC)

From the author
Colleagues, this news article is dedicated to presentation of work, which is inside the Wikimedia project, which means it is important both for the project and for its participants. Help correct the text in accordance with the rules. Thank you in advance. — Виктор Пинчук (talk) 04:10, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

Source of quote used in article: Полгода по островам... и странам— Виктор Пинчук (talk) 04:10, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

old
yep? VRhames (talk) 03:43, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

Improvements made
, substantial edits for clarity, coherence and independence have been made by a native English speaker (myself) to warrant a subsequent, independent review. JJLiu112 (talk) 19:57, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

"In English and Russian"
I gave the article a quick once-over for copyediting purposes, and I can't tell whether the "in English and Russian" bit means "the book was published in English and Russian" or "the speech was given in English and Russian." Darkfrog24 (talk) 16:24, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I don’t know to whom your question was addressed (to me — the author, or the last editor of the text, in whose interpretation it is currently), but I will answer the question. "The book was published in English and Russian" and "the speech was given in English and Russian", but the first statement is more important. I don’t make changes to the text, since it has been corrected by a native English speaker. — Виктор Пинчук (talk) 19:07, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
 * It's on the article talk page, so it's addressed to anyone working on the article who knows the answer and wants to take action. Darkfrog24 (talk) 19:42, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

Categorization
The article a month later, Russian photographer Viktor Pinchuk presents textbook in Simferopol, Crimea, about Viktor's photography textbook is in the Ukraine category as well as the Russia category; this one is only in the Russia category. Should it be in both the Russia and the Ukraine category? I am well aware of the sensitive nature of what I am saying and that's why I'm loath to just make the change. Ellenor2000 (talk) 15:27, 28 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Yes, thank you. JJLiu112 (talk) 17:21, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
 * @Ellenor2000: Yeah, that was Viktor; the December article was also only in Category:Russia before I added Category:Ukraine then. Heavy Water (talk) 17:38, 28 January 2023 (UTC)

For administrators
editprotected Please add a Category:Viktor Pinchuk (1969) — Виктор Пинчук (talk) 19:34, 7 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi Viktor, category added. Gryllida (talk) 00:01, 8 February 2023 (UTC)