Talk:San Diego State University pitcher taken first in baseball draft

Peer review 1

 * I added 3 more sources. Please re-review.  Thanks! --Jayron32. talk . contribs  23:20, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Good job
Sorry I was not able to improve this article or re-review it. It looks really good, with a very solid writing style.

I noticed two things for possible improvement: All-in-all, very good, but always room for improvement. Calebrw (talk) 06:30, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Quotes. Your story needs them. Could be the number 1 draft pick, a coach, an analyst, etc. Could also be something simple or something complex.
 * 2) Why were Pirates? and Twins teams who benefited? Explain that a bit and it plugs that hole nicely.