Talk:Santorum neologism spreads to Romney

Note
The article includes some bits previously reviewed and sourced as background material from articles listed in the Related news sect. -- Cirt (talk) 01:40, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1403884 [Not ready]
I agree with all of the suggestions by the reviewer, will begin to address this helpful advice soon. -- Cirt (talk) 02:31, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
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Response to review
Thanks very much for all of this advice and helpful input, I believe the article looks much better for it! -- Cirt (talk) 03:12, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Removed emphasis on Santorum, removed a lot of stuff from the lede.
 * 2) Removed early details on the santorum neologism. Trimmed size down significantly of first paragraph. Trimmed to one-sentence in the lede as descriptive background.
 * 3) Moved more detail of the santorum neologism further down, with the other additional info about the santorum neologism.
 * 4) Added some remarks by Santorum about his neologism, as suggested, above.
 * 5) Removed the picture (see at right as it had originally appeared in the article), no objections. ;) (File:Rick Santorum - frothy Caricature.jpg)
 * 6) Changed "document" to "promulgate", as was done with the prior article, no worries. ;)
 * 7) Trimmed a bunch of the sister links. Kept 2 only, one to Wikipedia and one to Wiktionary, which as a sister site is very informative regarding the chronological progression of the phenomenon over time.
 * 8) Moved the explanation of "why that definition?", up. As suggested by reviewer, moved it from the fifth paragraph, all the way up to the second paragraph.