Talk:Savage on Santorum on Savage

Background notes
Background sect includes material previously already reviewed and published from prior articles, cited in the Related news sect. This pertains to the last 2 paragraphs. -- Cirt (talk) 23:20, 20 March 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1441843 [Not ready]

 * Thanks very much for the review and the helpful suggestions. I'll get on addressing these as best I can. :) -- Cirt (talk) 17:08, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Response to review by Pi zero
I've taken several steps to address the review and helpful suggestions by : Hopefully this is satisfactory to address concerns from the initial review. And thanks again for the helpful suggestions! :) -- Cirt (talk) 17:41, 21 March 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) ✅. Removed the image (right) displayed initially. It was a video from a vlogger educating viewers on how to say santorum in . See diff
 * 2) ✅. Copyedited the lede, removing quotations from the lede, instead modified to summary-style text. See diff.
 * 3) ✅. Replaced video file suggested for removal from review, with side-by-side of the two subjects discussed in the article. See diff.
 * 4) Made some other minor copyedits to improve thrust of the first paragraph and overall flow.
 * 5) Added a further response from another source. See diff.

Review of revision 1442999 [Passed]

 * Thanks very much! :) -- Cirt (talk) 02:22, 22 March 2012 (UTC)