Talk:Several dozen protesters arrested outside White House for permit violations

Be sure to change the title on the main page as well. Also, "White House" is two words.

"whose son was lost in Iraq" Lost how? MIA? Killed? Also, who lost the son? The US or her? i.e. "was lost" or "Sheehan... lost."

"Sheehan... along with two dozen people" Is Sheehan not a person? "other people" or simply "others" is necessary.


 * I give up, I'm interested, but lost on this. The MoveOn e-mail is drawing blogger fire. The media over-hyped the milestone in my opinion. -Edbrown05 00:46, 28 October 2005 (UTC)