Talk:Singer Amy Winehouse dies at age 27

Review of revision 1262833 [Passed]
This comes across sounding like single-source: The lede starts with 'so-and-so is reporting that...', implying that the only reason to think the focal news event has happened is that one source has said so. --Pi zero (talk) 17:43, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Fix'd アンパロ Io ti odio! 17:46, 23 July 2011 (UTC)