Talk:SpaceX launches fifth resupply rocket to International Space Station

Review of revision 3154911 [Not ready]

 * Above review picks up on a number of points I've partially addressed in doing some copyediting. A touch more back story on the aborted launch would easily fill out a third paragraph; as would more detail on the launch rocket (is it a rocket, or a vehicle, if it lands?). --Brian McNeil / talk 22:01, 10 January 2015 (UTC)

I've expanded this out. I haven't attempted to address any lurking copyvio, and I've tried to leave the original text in-place as much as possible, so reviewers please be quite vigilant on that. BRS (Talk)   (Contribs) 01:48, 11 January 2015 (UTC)