Talk:Thought-controlled cybernetic arms demonstrated

Wikilinks
neither Jessie Sullivan not Claudia Mitchell appear to have a WP article about them. if that is the case, the wikilinks need to be removed. Doldrums 04:54, 15 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Corrected spelling of "Jesse Sullivan" links to existent Wikipedia article. The article for Claudia Mitchell has subsequently been created.  zuzu 14:53, 15 September 2006 (UTC)

Needs Editing
I've included the keyphrase "thought-controlled" in the leading paragraph, and reordered the subsequent paragraphs to make detailed description of the thought-control methodology the second paragraph. zuzu 14:53, 15 September 2006 (UTC)

Mentioning of Kuiken preceded his title
I moved this part of the text and placed it after the first time Kuiken's name is mentioned.