Talk:Turkish homeless man burns to death after being neglected

Could someone rewrite this?

"Almost no one tried to help him. One gave him a cookie, another passer by offered him his own coat. Someone called an ambulance, which picked him up and brought him to two different hospitals, none of which accepted him because he did not have an ID to show. The ambulance left him where they picked him up..."

It sounds very "See Spot run"-ish.Fephisto 15:15, 19 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Also it is based on one single source and if no more sources can be found this could be in danger of copyvio. DragonFire1024 18:41, 19 January 2007 (UTC)
 * It seems the single source is not in english. I am afraid english sources will have to be found. DragonFire1024 18:42, 19 January 2007 (UTC)
 * See this Towsonu2003 21:31, 19 January 2007 (UTC)

. &mdash; Doldrums(talk) 18:46, 19 January 2007 (UTC)